Rhyming Scheme/Flow: DONO I am going to have to edge this to Dono. It was close tho. There was more flow to the read for me.
Vocabulary: PUSHI can't give a definitive advantage to either side here. PUSH.
Topic/Meaning: WIGSPLIT Strong win by Wigspit in my opinion.
Storytelling/Progression: WIGSPLIT Another strong win by Wiggy, I was feelign the flow of the story much better.
Emotion: WIGSPIT. Despite the emotional grip that Dono had I felt it was under developed from the beginning . I am going to edge this to Wigspit.
Imagery: Push. Didn't feel either had an edge in this department Both did ok.
Poetic Techniques: PUSH Meh. Push.
Ending: WIGSPLIT By far the end was set up better by Wigsplit in my opinion. Donos felt rushed and like he was trying to get there too quickly. idk.
Overall I felt WIGSPIT got this IMHO.
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