Rhyming Scheme/Flow- tie
Vocabulary- Ill had a better syllable count
Topic/Meaning- the ending from Phe took this
Storytelling/Progression- blah blah on both sides but Phe moved it along more
Emotion- tied. again. similar.
Imagery- Phe with apple sauce metaphors created more of an image. lol
Poetic Techniques- ima tie this one.
Ending- Phenom... he had the topic wrapped up in the ending...
FV: the reason there are so many ties in my opinion is because both verses have similar content. i wish that there could have been a more creative route taken on both sides. vote goes to Phe barely edging it. good battle.
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