Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Intricate Skillz. To me he flowed better in this battle, Ill wasnt lacking tho.
Vocabulary- Intricate Skillz. I honestly seen better vocab from Skillz. Ill had some real good words in there, but Skillz edged it with a few more.
Topic/Meaning- Tie. Both had really good meaning's behind their topical.
Storytelling/Progression- Intricate Skillz. The way he broke it down did it for me. Even the chapters names fit really well with each little verse. Ill did really well, but it didnt pull me in like Skillz.
Emotion- Intricate Skillz. The emotion he put in the story made you feel the girls pain more imo. Ill did really well in this category too, but I think the way Skillz told his story helped you feel more for that girl, altho all rape victims should be treated fairly lol, I didnt laugh about rape, its not funny. Anyway, close, but Skillz.
Imagery- Intricate Skillz. Things suck as "Hidden Treasure". And I know exactly what he's talking about, it was pinpoint on with the shit. Ill had nice imagery, like the apple sauce line, and a bunch of other parts, he jus had a hell of a topical to go against is all.
Poetic Techniques- Intricate Skillz. His was very poetic, while Ills was more story like.
Ending- Intricate Skillz. Even tho I seent it coming, it ended his topical very well, and nice lol. Ill had a good ending too, it aint like his shit wasnt fire as well, Skillz just took this for me.
MVGT- Intricate Skillz. Ya'll both had very creative pieces, but Skillz went in on this shit. He impresses the shit out of me with his poetic ways lol. I was digging Ills too, but the creativness of Skillz took it. Just imo tho, yall did a hell of a battle, I read em both like 5 times to make sure, so my vote is official lol. Good luck to both of you.
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