Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Honestly, I think Intricate got it. He had a much smoother read.
Vocabulary- Black Book, better choice of words to use.
Topic/Meaning- Black Book, I liked the idea of his story more.
Storytelling/Progression- Intricate, better story telling skills.
Emotion- Intricate.
Imagery- Intricate.
Poetic Techniques- BB
Ending- Intricate
MVGT--- Intricate skills, he showed alot more skills in this, better rhyme scheme, a better story (although black had a better idea) and he made it look and feel like I was in the story. Good verses from both sides.
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