Rhyme Scheme/flow- i have to go with MF here, tbh Lunatic ur verse was hard to follow at some points- MF just flowed alot smoother-
Vocab- MF- he used a heavy bag of words here- Beyond didnt totally lack but he didnt have enough to take this cata-
Topic meaning- MF- i really liked his direction with this- very creative-
Storytelling- MF- once again- he told more of a story and every fit nicely together- lunatic wasnt quite the story-
Emotion- MF- this was a hard cata for the topic- yet he portrayed lots of emotion, ive never seen anyone so emotional bout a new port- but he managed to pull this off- good shit-
Imagery- MF- he dd a great job leaving details and painting a vivid picture here.
Poetic technique- honestly this was a tough cata- im leaning toward lunatic here because his verse was more poem like- rather than MF story mode-
Ending- MF clearly- i really enjoyed his ending- i felt satisfied after i finished reading his-
Mvgt MIND FUCK- good battle guys- but one just came with a lot of creativity and feeling here/ GL to both of you-
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