Ok before i start the voting guideline- imma say this was a great battle and very close- good shit yall-
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- both were really good here- this was a tie- i followed both verses very easily.
Vocabulary- once again a tie- good vocab from both-
Topic/Meaning- i have to go with DONO here- i connected with his topic a bit better-
Storytelling/Progression- DONO- both were good but i felt pleased with his story-
Emotion- tie- i feel both were full of emotion
Imagery- DONO- i felt he painted a better image of his topical- though MAY did a fantastic job also-
Poetic Techniques- tie- both had a poetic swag to their verses- good job fellas
Ending- DONO- i felt satisfied after reading through his ending- MAY i felt that i needed to know more-
After reading both verses- which were both really nice reads-
MVGT DONO- i felt he did enough to win here- good drops from both-
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