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Unread 10-03-2011, 03:28 PM
RhetoriK
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
32 Won / 13 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
249 Won / 72 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
2 Won / 2 Lost
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - STRANGE1
Vocabulary - STRANGE1
Topic/Meaning - Black Book
Storytelling/Progression - Black Book
Emotion - Black Book
Imagery - Black Book
Poetic Techniques - Black Book
Ending - STRANGE1

Analysis - Strange had a pretty vivid scheme throughout the piece, he carried it well. Book took a more poetic method, and did well but categorically, S1 excelled more. S1's vocab usage was deeper. He even vesseled Chineese teminology with good context. The overall endgame was stronge with Black Books storyline. I think his actually hit home more for me but from a writer's point of view his was a bit more multi-faceted and tied together well. Strong showing from both. Another great read. Hope to see either in the following rounds

Vote - Black Book
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Unread 10-03-2011, 03:28 PM   #10
 
RhetoriK
Estimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
32 Won / 13 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
249 Won / 72 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
2 Won / 2 Lost
 
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - STRANGE1
Vocabulary - STRANGE1
Topic/Meaning - Black Book
Storytelling/Progression - Black Book
Emotion - Black Book
Imagery - Black Book
Poetic Techniques - Black Book
Ending - STRANGE1

Analysis - Strange had a pretty vivid scheme throughout the piece, he carried it well. Book took a more poetic method, and did well but categorically, S1 excelled more. S1's vocab usage was deeper. He even vesseled Chineese teminology with good context. The overall endgame was stronge with Black Books storyline. I think his actually hit home more for me but from a writer's point of view his was a bit more multi-faceted and tied together well. Strong showing from both. Another great read. Hope to see either in the following rounds

Vote - Black Book
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