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Unread 10-02-2011, 06:13 PM
RhetoriK
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
32 Won / 13 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
249 Won / 72 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
2 Won / 2 Lost
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Intricate Skillz,

Vocabulary - Intricate Skillz

Topic/Meaning - Deep Prose

Storytelling/Progression - Deep Prose

Emotion - Intricate Skillz

Imagery - Intricate Skillz

Poetic Techniques - Intricate Skillz

Ending - Deep Prose

Well matched battle. I really liked the creative angles taken by both. I feel that the storyline was stronger from prose, but the development, description, and imagery were stronger with Intricate. The word choice and verbage at times were a deadlock, but ISkillz was more consistent. Prose had the better ending of the two. When his ended I felt that I had read a story from end to end. With Int's I wanted more when it was over. Thats a powerful difference in storytelling and its has to be a careful descision by the author when picking angles creativley. Loved the reads.

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Unread 10-02-2011, 06:13 PM   #13
 
RhetoriK
Estimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
32 Won / 13 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
249 Won / 72 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
2 Won / 2 Lost
 
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Intricate Skillz,

Vocabulary - Intricate Skillz

Topic/Meaning - Deep Prose

Storytelling/Progression - Deep Prose

Emotion - Intricate Skillz

Imagery - Intricate Skillz

Poetic Techniques - Intricate Skillz

Ending - Deep Prose

Well matched battle. I really liked the creative angles taken by both. I feel that the storyline was stronger from prose, but the development, description, and imagery were stronger with Intricate. The word choice and verbage at times were a deadlock, but ISkillz was more consistent. Prose had the better ending of the two. When his ended I felt that I had read a story from end to end. With Int's I wanted more when it was over. Thats a powerful difference in storytelling and its has to be a careful descision by the author when picking angles creativley. Loved the reads.

Vote-Intricate Skillz
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