Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Skillz - This was a close cat. I Felt the style that Deep prose used at times made the flow awkward for me while reading it.
Vocabulary - Skillz - Again another close cat. But he consistantly had good vocab throughout his whole verse.
Topic/Meaning - Prose - I liked both of these, I felt Prose had the slight edge in this cat. Very close though.
Storytelling/Progression - Prose - Agreed with what Wig had said about having to go back and read skillz to take it all in. Felt proses came through more fluently.
Emotion - Tie - Close cat. Neither of you edged out the cat.
Imagery - Skillz - I felt the wording that skillz used painted a better picture for the topic he brought. There were points in his verse were you can see exactly what he wanted you to.
Poetic Techniques - Skillz - This part of the verse was very good in this aspect. Both took different approaches but skillz did bring a more poetic approach
As one is cloaked with a robe, to signify priority,
One is de robed, to persway my thoughts of not informing me,
Yet my mind stands firm, as this statue alone, symbolizes minority?
Ending - Prose - I felt that both could have ended their drops a bit better, but prose gets this for his last 4 lines. His seemed to have more of a closing feeling to it.
Very close battle here. I am leaning more towards Skillz On this one.
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