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**Wigsplit** · #8 10-02-2011, 11:04 AM

I dropped a mofuckin fair, idk where the fuck it went, I guess I'll do it over goddamnit lol

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Dono, I really liked Mays at the start, but it kinda edged off jus a teeny bit imo, Dono's flowed really well, its dammn close, maybe jus a preference
Vocabulary-Tie, both have an awesome vocab at there arsonal
Topic/Meaning- Tie, both was dope and stayed on topic imo
Storytelling/Progression-Dono, his story had more substance to it? It went a long from beg to end really well, Mayneaks did too, but didnt put you in the situation like Donos did
Emotion-Dono, Like I said, he kinda put you right in the mix, so you could feel it as it went along
Imagery-Dono, he painted his story really well, I aint takin nothin from Mayneak tho, his shit was dope too
Poetic Techniques-Tie
Ending-Dono, I think Dono ended his on a really good note lol, Mayneaks ended good too, but I wasnt waiting for it like I was Donos, he had me on edge I spose

MVGT-DonoTheGod, he told an excellent story from this chicks point of view, and he made you wanna know what happened next, Mays was awesome as well, I was jus feelin Donos that much more, good battle, and good luck

**Wigsplit** · 10-02-2011, 11:04 AM

I dropped a mofuckin fair, idk where the fuck it went, I guess I'll do it over goddamnit lol

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Dono, I really liked Mays at the start, but it kinda edged off jus a teeny bit imo, Dono's flowed really well, its dammn close, maybe jus a preference
Vocabulary-Tie, both have an awesome vocab at there arsonal
Topic/Meaning- Tie, both was dope and stayed on topic imo
Storytelling/Progression-Dono, his story had more substance to it? It went a long from beg to end really well, Mayneaks did too, but didnt put you in the situation like Donos did
Emotion-Dono, Like I said, he kinda put you right in the mix, so you could feel it as it went along
Imagery-Dono, he painted his story really well, I aint takin nothin from Mayneak tho, his shit was dope too
Poetic Techniques-Tie
Ending-Dono, I think Dono ended his on a really good note lol, Mayneaks ended good too, but I wasnt waiting for it like I was Donos, he had me on edge I spose

MVGT-DonoTheGod, he told an excellent story from this chicks point of view, and he made you wanna know what happened next, Mays was awesome as well, I was jus feelin Donos that much more, good battle, and good luck

10-02-2011, 11:04 AM	#8
Wigsplit <Geek Squad> Ranked Audio Record 23 Won / 32 Lost Ranked Text Record 78 Won / 85 Lost Join Date: Dec 2010 Voted: 0 audio / 917 text Posts: 2,309 Mentioned: 172 Post(s) Tagged: 21 Thread(s)	I dropped a mofuckin fair, idk where the fuck it went, I guess I'll do it over goddamnit lol Voting Rubix Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Dono, I really liked Mays at the start, but it kinda edged off jus a teeny bit imo, Dono's flowed really well, its dammn close, maybe jus a preference Vocabulary-Tie, both have an awesome vocab at there arsonal Topic/Meaning- Tie, both was dope and stayed on topic imo Storytelling/Progression-Dono, his story had more substance to it? It went a long from beg to end really well, Mayneaks did too, but didnt put you in the situation like Donos did Emotion-Dono, Like I said, he kinda put you right in the mix, so you could feel it as it went along Imagery-Dono, he painted his story really well, I aint takin nothin from Mayneak tho, his shit was dope too Poetic Techniques-Tie Ending-Dono, I think Dono ended his on a really good note lol, Mayneaks ended good too, but I wasnt waiting for it like I was Donos, he had me on edge I spose MVGT-DonoTheGod, he told an excellent story from this chicks point of view, and he made you wanna know what happened next, Mays was awesome as well, I was jus feelin Donos that much more, good battle, and good luck __________________
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