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IV · #10 10-02-2011, 08:52 AM

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary- Both were nice, but skillz edged it
Topic/Meaning- enjoyed the meaning of prose, i think he went for something a little different, think it fitted well and i enjoyed it a little more
Storytelling/Progression- both were good, i feel that prose won this section because he had more of a story line
Emotion- skillz got this, was a really deep read good job
Imagery- both were on the same sort of level, although i could picture prose slightly more
Poetic Techniques- this is difficult because they were both so different and hard to compare, Prose flowed really nicely, skillz was more complex with his scheme, TIE?
Ending- i think both wrapped their story up nicely, but i'll give this to prose because he really finished the story he was telling

Over all my vote goes to DEEP PROSE because he came with something different, i enjoyed it, it flowed nicely, nice emotion and a good story line. Was really close though! good job..

IV · 10-02-2011, 08:52 AM

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary- Both were nice, but skillz edged it
Topic/Meaning- enjoyed the meaning of prose, i think he went for something a little different, think it fitted well and i enjoyed it a little more
Storytelling/Progression- both were good, i feel that prose won this section because he had more of a story line
Emotion- skillz got this, was a really deep read good job
Imagery- both were on the same sort of level, although i could picture prose slightly more
Poetic Techniques- this is difficult because they were both so different and hard to compare, Prose flowed really nicely, skillz was more complex with his scheme, TIE?
Ending- i think both wrapped their story up nicely, but i'll give this to prose because he really finished the story he was telling

Over all my vote goes to DEEP PROSE because he came with something different, i enjoyed it, it flowed nicely, nice emotion and a good story line. Was really close though! good job..

10-02-2011, 08:52 AM	#10
IV <Red Ribbon Army> Live Battler Ranked Audio Record 4 Won / 1 Lost Ranked Text Record 153 Won / 28 Lost Exclusive Text Record 3 Won / 0 Lost Join Date: Oct 2006 Voted: 0 audio / 1239 text Posts: 5,958 Mentioned: 1299 Post(s) Tagged: 51 Thread(s)	Voting Rubix Rhyming Scheme/Flow Vocabulary- Both were nice, but skillz edged it Topic/Meaning- enjoyed the meaning of prose, i think he went for something a little different, think it fitted well and i enjoyed it a little more Storytelling/Progression- both were good, i feel that prose won this section because he had more of a story line Emotion- skillz got this, was a really deep read good job Imagery- both were on the same sort of level, although i could picture prose slightly more Poetic Techniques- this is difficult because they were both so different and hard to compare, Prose flowed really nicely, skillz was more complex with his scheme, TIE? Ending- i think both wrapped their story up nicely, but i'll give this to prose because he really finished the story he was telling Over all my vote goes to DEEP PROSE because he came with something different, i enjoyed it, it flowed nicely, nice emotion and a good story line. Was really close though! good job..
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