Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow-Skillz got this catagory, he flowed better imo
Vocabulary-Skillz had quite the vocab in this one
Topic/Meaning-Tie, both had good concepts, its too hard to pick whose meaning was more meaningful lol
Storytelling/Progression-Deep Prose kept the story goin a bit smoother, Skillz had me thinkin, I had to go back n read it again to take it all in lol
Emotion-Deep, another close one tho
Imagery-Actually, Skillz painted a really good picture, one of my favorite lines was These flames roll rampant,the agony endured is painless,
Yet it burns, vaguely through raven black visions, Def nice imagery there
Poetic Techniques-Skillz got this dept
Ending-Deep took the ending, close for sure, but I was likin the jesus shit a lil more
MVGT- Intricate Skillz, he had a more deeper verse imo, and it flowed better, had a better vocab imo, and made ya think a lil more, which aint always a good thing, but thats in the readers opinion, Deep Prose, I def liked your shit, nice story, good ideas, I jus felt one was more on point this time, good battle yall, n good luck
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