Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Tie - Both were about even in this cat. Neither was really flawed or shined more than the others.
Vocabulary - Ex - Slighty. He picked the right spots to use certain words with this. Edge started good with this cat and it slowly got simpler towards the end.
Topic/Meaning - Edge - Felt He brought a better idea and concept to the table for this picture, although he could have portrayed it a little better. Ex sorta just went with what the picture was showing.
Storytelling/Progression - Tie - Both did decent in this category.
Emotion - Ex - Felt like his emotion connected with this picture a bit better.
Imagery - Ex - His imagery fit the picture a bit better
Poetic Techniques - Edge - Because of the concept he brought to the table for the picture
Ending - Tie - Both ended their verse pretty decent.
Ex GVT
and wins 3-0 KO
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