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Unread 10-01-2011, 10:36 PM
ozark
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow-tie- both were solid in this cata
Vocabulary-mind got this cata...he just came with a wider variety of vocab
Topic/Meaning-tie-both had good angles of this concept..
Storytelling/Progression- ok this is a tough one....i honestly dont know which way to go, cuz both had a nice story with their topical...
Emotion-i felt mind got this cata, his verse was full of emotion
Imagery-i felt minds emotion helped push his imagery through to another level.
Poetic Techniques- tie, both came with some fluent smooth poetic terms here
Ending-mind takes this cata, i didnt really connect with seans ending that well.....

mvgt mind fuck
Unread 10-01-2011, 10:36 PM   #7
 
ozark
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Estimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.5/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.61/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.61/10 stars
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Rhyming Scheme/Flow-tie- both were solid in this cata
Vocabulary-mind got this cata...he just came with a wider variety of vocab
Topic/Meaning-tie-both had good angles of this concept..
Storytelling/Progression- ok this is a tough one....i honestly dont know which way to go, cuz both had a nice story with their topical...
Emotion-i felt mind got this cata, his verse was full of emotion
Imagery-i felt minds emotion helped push his imagery through to another level.
Poetic Techniques- tie, both came with some fluent smooth poetic terms here
Ending-mind takes this cata, i didnt really connect with seans ending that well.....

mvgt mind fuck
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