Rhyming Scheme/Flow - mczack. At times Swagger seemed to ge choppy, the rhyme was inconsistant and everything could get a bit scattered. The simple style of mc's took this cat in basic form.
Vocabulary - Tie. Neither really tried anything creative with their words so no one stands out.
Topic/Meaning - mczack. Swagger has to much of a gangster/gunplay generic piece while mc took it into a more topical side.
Storytelling/Progression - Tie. Neither really showed any skills or work in this catagory and both lingered and dwelled without a story.
Emotion - mczack. There was little signs of resentment and anger in Swagger's verse but zack stormed ahead of him in this cat.
Imagery - mczack. Swagger never really did anything in it, and mczack did try a few adjectives, although you need a lot of work in it too.
Poetic Techniques - Tie, again neither really focused on anything.
Ending - Tie. Neither really added a twist or clever wording, so nothing is edged here.
GMV// mczackaryg. Both showed a lot of flaws in their verses, but I think the topic is what took this for mczack as Swag went off on a gunplay generic rap rant.
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