Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Tie. Both had fluent verses.
Vocabulary - Steelio - Easily got this. His vocab produced at a high level.
Topic/Meaning - Skillz - the build up to before the battle when they charged in fit the picture perfectly. Steelio had a nice piece also, I felt that Skillz was more consistently following the same topic and meaning.
Storytelling/Progression - Skillz - The topic leading into this one. As I said I felt he followed his topic/meaning more consistently then Steelio had. I also think his had a more story telling base from the rise of the climax to the fall and the beginning of the war throughout the plot.
Emotion - Skillz - This was action a very close category. But because of the storytelling and progression that Skillz had over Steelio's verse, I felt that the build up before the war gave him this category. It made it more emotionally sound to where you can actually feel the emotions as you were reading it.
Imagery - Skillz - Skillz imagery just depicted the picture better.
Poetic Techniques - Tie - Both had there different aspect of this were they shined at.
Ending - Skillz - Only because of the storytelling factor from start to finish. I actually was not feeling that ending, I felt it could have been a bit better. But It still worked out for your piece.
Skillz GMV
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