Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- I think they both did really well, tie
Vocabulary- Steelio, but Skillz had some good shit in this cat too
Topic/Meaning- Ima give it too Skillz, I liked how he gave the story before the battle, the build up was nice
Storytelling/Progression- Skillz, imo his was easier to follow, and it started off well and ended well, Steelio was nice too
Emotion- Skillz got it for me, he told how the people felt leading up to the war really good, I was feelin the emotion on Steelios as well, but it didnt hit as hard for me
Imagery- Skillz once again, he painted a very good picture, impressed me
Poetic Techniques- Tie, both was good in this one
Ending- Skillz, I jus liked how it all went together, Steelios didnt hit as hard for me
Overall Vote- Intricate Skillz, I just felt his more, he did really good putting it together and flowing it nicely, Steelios was nice, but didnt grasp my attention like Skillz, good shit from both, yall did a good job, for real lol
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