rhyme scheme and flow- G was flowing a little more clearly imo
Vocab- Beyond was real deep with the vocab. Gotta go with him.
Topic- I liked G's idea more BUT he didn't really illustrate it. Giving it to Beyond
Emotion- I thought G was almost like a cypher the last bit. so i have to give the heartfelt emotion to beyond
storytelling- I have to give this to beyond since G was a little over the place.
Imagery- as to having the picture painted in my head, beyond tried to be to complex so the picture wasn't real visible. going with G on this one.
Poetic technique- this is where Beyond excelled imo
Ending- was loving G till the ending bar.... like he just used a filler. Giving it to beyond
Overall- Great battle. First topical ever so you guys are going to help me alot getting into it myself. Both used skill and thought to try to formulate a hard hitting, emotional verse. Although it was close, I think one edged a bit more due to a few things.
vote- Beyond lunatic
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