Rhyming Scheme/Flow--- parts of lunatics flowed really nice, but Kool was more consistent- kool
Vocabulary- lunatic, very complex, nice
Topic/Meaning- Lunatic, liked the dead dog route, sad though..
Storytelling/Progression- lunatic had a clearer storyline
Emotion- both very emotional, but lunatic
Imagery- lunatic
Poetic Techniques- lunatic showed it wasn't all about a perfect rhyme structure
Ending- Kool your ending was funny, could tell it wasn't your best and you wanted to drop. Lunatic i liked your ending
Overall- Lunatic i think your verse was emotional, different, and articulate. Although it didn't flow or rhyme perfectly it still had a good impact with a clear story line. Kool your verse was emotional and rhymed well, flowed nicely, not much of a story line/progression and think you could have done better.
Vote- Beyond Lunatic
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