Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Rhyming wize Catharis was smooth and steady to follow....Strange : Rhymes weren't that alluring ....
Vocabulary - Both were on same level...
Storytelling/Progression - Strange had more elaborated one...
Topic/Meaning - Strange got this one ..it doesn't mean that u'r bad ..
Storytelling/Progression - Strange got this one...
Emotion - Catharis....got it...
Imagery - both were on kinda same level...
Poetic Techniques - Couple lines were good from catharis
Ending : Strange had good ending ...
Vote : Goes for whom ? both were on kinda same level so both of ya got it ... \\^// ...its tuff but vote goes to strange...
Good looks
Last edited by Eye G; 09-21-2011 at 08:04 AM.
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