^If any of you have a problem with the unexplained votes, I can get FAME and Mikey to expand them.
Rhyming Scheme/Flow - Ill Phenom. At times I felt Black was slightly too slant for me. Ill kept it pretty consistant, but once again, avoid using one multie for just 3 times.
Vocabulary - Black-Book. Close cat, but I'd slightly edge it this way.
Topic/Meaning - Black-Book. Really my old style here. The overall metaphor revealed at the end. As you elevate, you will learn how to reveal it a litle better and add some more indepth metaphors throughout. Ill was good but the concept just wasnet up to Book's level.
Storytelling/Progression - Ill Phenom. I felt his story had more events. It connected well from arrival, absailing, diary, falling, death etc. really smothly, while I felt that Book seemed to linger a little in the middle sections.
Emotion - Black-Book. The glee-filled ending got Black to the cat. I'm still feeling some trouble with Ill's. He's adding in what he needs to but it's just not connecting like it should. Hopfully that'll fall into place soon.
Imagery - Ill Phenom. The imagery on the rope and the fall and stuff was all well written on and Black never managed to catch him.
Poetic Techniques - Black-Book. The metaphors throughout got this to me.
Ending - Black-Book. Closest cat. Book had the twist reveal, which usually wins, but the powerful wording from Ill put up a big fight for it.
GMV// Black-Book. Damn this was close, and I'll admit that I probably enjoyed Ill's more. Book just got all the right things down. Ill elevated so quickly but now Book has slowly creeped up, and this was a great topical which could have went either way. PM me if FAME and Mikey's votes need elaborated on. Great contest.
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