Rhyming Scheme/Flow — Like EtH said, neither did anything to set themselves apart from the other that much in the flow aspect of it. I'm giving the rhyming aspect to Ill though. He used a more complex rhyme scheme, & Super used a one word rhyme scheme.
Vocabulary — I'll give it to Ill. His vocabulary was better, but Super also did well here.
Topic/Meaning — Ill got this one. Super's storyline was a bit confusing(?) Ill's story was more clean-cut & related to the picture better.
Storytelling/Progression — Ill. His had more of a build to it. Super didn't have much of a build to his conclusion.
Emotion — Ill got this one pretty easily. He had some pretty good emotion, but could have came off better in places. Super just didn't really have the emotion he needed to take this category.
Imagery — Ill. Super did paint a picture w/ the bats around the house & the typhoon & the sky, but Ill just painted a more in-depth picture. His imagery was at both an emotional & physical element when Super was just at a physical level.
Poetic Techniques — Ill. The metaphors & puns were just a lot better than what Super came with.
Ending — Ill. He wrapped his story up in a way that made you feel like the story was closed, but there were a few lose ends that make you think, "Hmm. That could have gone somewhere." Super closed the story in a way that leaves you thinking, "There should have been more to that."
Vote: Ill Phenom.
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