Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow- Im gonna go with Lizman on it, both was good tho, his just seemed a lil more complex with the Rhyme scheme
Vocabulary- Lizman
Topic/Meaning- I felt that Ill Phenom related to the topic better
Storytelling/Progression- Ima give it to Ill on account his seemed to progress with the picture better
Emotion- Lizman, he edged it in the emotion, tho both was good
Imagery- Ill kept the imagery goin with the picture best, so he gets this cat
Poetic Techniques-Lizman, he was more poetic with it
Ending- Ill Phenom, considering his went with the topic more through my eyes
Overall, I felt Ill stayed on topic better and had a more enjoyable read, not takin anything away from Liz, so the...
Vote=Ill Phenom
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