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Unread 09-11-2011, 03:38 PM
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Aggression can be a bit more. Def like the lyrics, I wasn't as much bothered by the ing's but I will agree that you have to change it up a little. Def the flow was good. The concepts in the lyrics for the most part were on point. Good stuff. Keep it up.
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Unread 09-11-2011, 03:38 PM   #5
 
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Aggression can be a bit more. Def like the lyrics, I wasn't as much bothered by the ing's but I will agree that you have to change it up a little. Def the flow was good. The concepts in the lyrics for the most part were on point. Good stuff. Keep it up.
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