Straight Up - love the whispering intro...first person had nice energy - lyrics were crazy...could have been better at times, but still the shockfactor is there...hook was good - sounded like you stacked the vocals, that could have been lined up a tad better...second verse could have been better...felt the artist wasnt comfortable and the lyrics were missing some syllables so he hesitated to fill the voids...the "shotguns blow" part was a great change of pace...third verse was nice - few times the artst slipped up, but caught himself...more concentration on the syllable count will fix that....again, hook was great...really grabbed my attention...nice beat
Tongue Sick - right off the bat, your a tad off beat...not the biggest fan of this beat...really like the flow of the first verse, but i cant help but think that a better beat would have done you soo much more justice...good hook...second verse had great energy...towards the middle, the artist lost momentum...lyrics were good...third verse picked up where the first left off...nothing really to pick at here - just a case of more practice to define your skills...they are definitely present, just need to be polished a tad
your quality is pretty good...didnt take away from the songs at all so that was good...this isnt my type of music, but i can see myself listening to some wigsplit down the road....good job man
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