Rhyme Scheme/Flow= RULE- His drop flowed more smoothly and multis were better
Vocabulary= Almighty- Both had nice Vocab, but Almighty was slightly better
Topic/Meaning= Gonna have to say Almighty edged this cat, in relation to the picture he used, both did a good job but as a whole i'm going with him
Storyline/progression= RULE- Got this, felt his drop evolved more, think Almighty having to break it down to three sections (Which was cool and all) took away from progression of story
Emotion= RULE- Edged, another close one but the pain of his character was felt more IMO
Imagery= RULE- Both had me picturing where they were coming from, but again i think having 1 whole drop rather than 3 helped me imagine the story a little better
Poetic Techniques= RULE- Co-sign ETH on this one...Sort of Tarrantino like with the story (Yes i know he isn't a Poet) but i enjoyed the technique, so to speak
Ending= RULE- Had more of a build up and ultimately led to a better ending, Almighty's were sort of divided so took away from a particular ending
Vote= RULE...Enjoyed both reads, but as far as a Topical, He shined in a few more Categories....Good drops guys
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