Rhyme Scheme/Flow=RULE, he jus did it better imo
Vocab=Tie, I mean through my eyes, Almighty used a few words that were more vocabtastic, but nothin special, RULE used some words that werent used everyday either, so tizzie
Topic/Meanin=RULE, his story appealed to me more when it comes to matchin with the topic
Storyline/Progression=RULE, It was jus more intense, I wanted to follow n see what happened til the end, whereas, Almighty's was slightly boring imo, no hate
Emotion=RULE, I could feel the pain in his story, Al's was at best alright with the emotion
Imagery=RULE, I could see the chick in pain downin pills, Almighty's was good too, jus didnt grasp my attention as much, ive seen so many war movies it was almost cliche
Poetic Techniques=RULE, I jus felt he was more poetic with it
Ending=RULE, He had a good endin, Al's was kinda 3 endings, it was dope tho, I jus dug one more is all, everything here is jus my opinion on the matter, so dont take it to heart, im sure the next dude thinks different
Vote=RULE, He had a good emotionally felt drop, I liked the darkness of the matter, n it went real well with his choice of topic
Last edited by Wigsplit; 08-28-2011 at 11:40 AM.
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