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**NOBLE** · #1 08-27-2011, 01:10 PM

From the way you wrote it, it's not obvious that you were talking about his bars. The only thing that really stood out is your use of multies (which was great). But the punch isn't apparent.

**NOBLE** · 08-27-2011, 01:10 PM

From the way you wrote it, it's not obvious that you were talking about his bars. The only thing that really stood out is your use of multies (which was great). But the punch isn't apparent.

08-27-2011, 01:10 PM	#1
NOBLE <Natural Selection> Staff Hall Of Famer Ranked Audio Record 4 Won / 0 Lost Ranked Text Record 30 Won / 8 Lost Exclusive Text Record 1 Won / 1 Lost Join Date: May 2011 Voted: 408 audio / 1061 text Posts: 6,105 Mentioned: 3633 Post(s) Tagged: 76 Thread(s)	From the way you wrote it, it's not obvious that you were talking about his bars. The only thing that really stood out is your use of multies (which was great). But the punch isn't apparent. __________________
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