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Unread 08-13-2011, 11:18 AM
Wigsplit
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23 Won / 32 Lost
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78 Won / 85 Lost
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Flow/ Rhyme Scheme- trill
Vocab.- /trill
Storytelling- /hall
Poetic Techniques- /hall
Emotion- /hall
Ending- /hall

vote=hallucination, both was good but one was battle form, n the other was topical style, so trill jus needs to figure out shit on the topicals is all, but still a good verse
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Unread 08-13-2011, 11:18 AM   #10
 
Wigsplit
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.98/10 stars
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23 Won / 32 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.98/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.59/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.59/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.59/10 stars
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78 Won / 85 Lost
 
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Flow/ Rhyme Scheme- trill
Vocab.- /trill
Storytelling- /hall
Poetic Techniques- /hall
Emotion- /hall
Ending- /hall

vote=hallucination, both was good but one was battle form, n the other was topical style, so trill jus needs to figure out shit on the topicals is all, but still a good verse
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