Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Both Did Good
Vocabulary: Dono
Topic/Meaning: Dono
Storytelling/Progression: Book
Emotion: Dono
Poetic Techniques: Dono
Ending: Dono
Both had some nice verses here with meaning and i could telll alot of thought went into each verse. I jus enjoyed Dono's story a bit more and felt it. Nice spar here and goodluck in future battles
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