Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Toss up
Vocabulary: Dono
Topic/Meaning: Book
Storytelling/Progression: Book
Emotion: Dono
Poetic Techniques: Dono
Ending: leaning towards Dono, but also a toss up.
Good drops on both sides. Book took the rappers approach, and IMO had the better storyline and felt like it could have been normal verse. Dono had a more emotional, poetic drop. Also good shit, less like a normal rap verse but conveyed the message clearly and had a concise ending. I think Dono might have edged this one slightly...
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