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Catharsis · #5 07-17-2011, 11:23 AM

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Liz
Vocabulary: Liz
Topic/Meaning: Wig
Storytelling/Progression: Wig
Emotion: Wig
Poetic Techniques: Liz
Ending: Wig

Victory Wig, ...I've been reading and writing poetry since I was little, Saul Williams is one of my favorites, so the abstract approach of Liz's drop wasn't lost on me, but with all it's flowery vocab it didn't have the emotional relevance of Wig's true story. Good drops from both tho.

Catharsis · 07-17-2011, 11:23 AM

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Liz
Vocabulary: Liz
Topic/Meaning: Wig
Storytelling/Progression: Wig
Emotion: Wig
Poetic Techniques: Liz
Ending: Wig

Victory Wig, ...I've been reading and writing poetry since I was little, Saul Williams is one of my favorites, so the abstract approach of Liz's drop wasn't lost on me, but with all it's flowery vocab it didn't have the emotional relevance of Wig's true story. Good drops from both tho.

07-17-2011, 11:23 AM	#5
Catharsis Basic Member Ranked Audio Record 3 Won / 2 Lost Ranked Text Record 212 Won / 61 Lost Join Date: Aug 2009 Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: 1,188 Mentioned: 54 Post(s) Tagged: 3 Thread(s)	Rhyming Scheme/Flow: Liz Vocabulary: Liz Topic/Meaning: Wig Storytelling/Progression: Wig Emotion: Wig Poetic Techniques: Liz Ending: Wig Victory Wig, ...I've been reading and writing poetry since I was little, Saul Williams is one of my favorites, so the abstract approach of Liz's drop wasn't lost on me, but with all it's flowery vocab it didn't have the emotional relevance of Wig's true story. Good drops from both tho. Last edited by Revan; 09-29-2012 at 08:30 AM.
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