Lemme show you some examples of how a complex bar should be written ....these are a chosen few from various people ... i wont name who wrote what... but they're all fresh with a clever punch with every aspect connecting properly both ways
That fake American accent? .... it's CRAZY N' LAME so stop "Lyin' On Tracks" unless ya "WAITIN FA TRAINS" to roll "STRAIGHT THROUGH YA BRAIN" untill the SIDES GO SPLAT if you "Train Ya Head" you get ya "MIND ON TRACK"
I'll leave you "Shook" and "TOSSED IN THE AIR" i'm too COCKY TO CARE, see you "Remind Me Of Dice" cuz i've "Seen How You Roll" ya always "SPOTTED WITH SQUARES"
This kid aint got nothing but weak punches & multi's i GO WITH THE FACTS I'M SERIOUS, the way "Bitches" "Soak Up" this "Pussy's Flow" is an (Oaverie Action) "OVER REACTION" ..."PERIOD!" (0_0)
I'm sorry e'rybody..I know it's my fault.. This WEAK GUY SUCKS but now he has a title cuz i KEYSTYLED DRUNK after i "Smoked Reefer & Passed Remark" with FINESSE & INTELLIGENCE while he "Blew Out The Same Old Ohs" and never said ANYTHING RELEVANT/ I call it the the "Sir Sean CONNERY CYCLE" cuz for this "English Character" to have any kinda "BOND W/ A TITLE" you really need a "SCOTSMAN TO GUIDE YOU"
I think-it's-great he loves "Prison-Break" the show carries the SAME CLOUT AS HIM he'll need to "TAKE OUT THE LINK" to "ESCAPE" NOW N WIN cuz his "Bars End Up Forced" whenever he "BREAKS OUT THE PEN"
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When ya flow stay submerged in the fountain of youth - Rakim
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Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
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