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This kid cant use wordplay, I highly doubt a metaphor was attempted. He rhymed Out 3 times, NEEDS ME IN HER BOX is capped for no apparent reason. Feet & Feed do not sound the same. so i can FEET/FEED HER SOCKS OFF for some OUTLANDISH STICK[?]. How can people not realize that both lines make no sense at all?. Really, i've asked him himself to explain and he couldn't come up with an explanation neither. Voters need to break down bars a little more or cases like this will get over-shadowed by nonsense.
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This kid cant use wordplay, I highly doubt a metaphor was attempted. He rhymed Out 3 times, NEEDS ME IN HER BOX is capped for no apparent reason. Feet & Feed do not sound the same. so i can FEET/FEED HER SOCKS OFF for some OUTLANDISH STICK[?]. How can people not realize that both lines make no sense at all?. Really, i've asked him himself to explain and he couldn't come up with an explanation neither. Voters need to break down bars a little more or cases like this will get over-shadowed by nonsense.
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