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**John Dos** · #14 09-23-2010, 05:45 PM

pretty good rhymes/multis...ya emotion on the track need to improve, the 2 syllable rhyme scheme was gettin a lil old about half way through, no lie..decent work overall though.

**John Dos** · 09-23-2010, 05:45 PM

pretty good rhymes/multis...ya emotion on the track need to improve, the 2 syllable rhyme scheme was gettin a lil old about half way through, no lie..decent work overall though.

09-23-2010, 05:45 PM	#14
John Dos Live Battler Ranked Text Record 184 Won / 131 Lost Join Date: Mar 2009 Voted: 0 audio / 1131 text Posts: 4,955 Mentioned: 87 Post(s) Tagged: 3 Thread(s)	pretty good rhymes/multis...ya emotion on the track need to improve, the 2 syllable rhyme scheme was gettin a lil old about half way through, no lie..decent work overall though.
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