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Unread 08-30-2010, 11:58 PM
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Its wittyness. How you word your shit. like TASTE THE NINE & BREAK YA SPINE. Their relevance is that they rhyme & they're about hurting people. but so predictable.

You have to make it as if you're talking. UA does a good job of landin solid punches without making it too predictable.

Listen you're a PITIFUL JERK. You put hours into rap, I put in MINIMAL WORK. & Put him in a grave so cops can DIG IN THE DIRT..

Etc, it rhymes. But it goes together. It pieces nicely. Make sure you sneak a concept/wordplay/punch in there tho
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Its wittyness. How you word your shit. like TASTE THE NINE & BREAK YA SPINE. Their relevance is that they rhyme & they're about hurting people. but so predictable.

You have to make it as if you're talking. UA does a good job of landin solid punches without making it too predictable.

Listen you're a PITIFUL JERK. You put hours into rap, I put in MINIMAL WORK. & Put him in a grave so cops can DIG IN THE DIRT..

Etc, it rhymes. But it goes together. It pieces nicely. Make sure you sneak a concept/wordplay/punch in there tho
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