You know i have to commend you for actually trying to rap.
You sound like one of those country chicks that were raised around guns and hunting and shit and actually might be about that life lol
with that said, do you write while listening to the beat? You should write one line at a time, but your bars actually towards the end were pretty good, just need to work on riding the beat.
I like how you rap about what you know, but you gotta work on staying on beat and slowing down.
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