[IIAM]

It’s a good track
I feel like I could do without
The hiss throughout the track
it sounds like it’s from the sample(maybe)
Might be tape hiss or the needle
Had a shitload of lint on it.
Or that noise is somewhere in your audio signal.
Also the track feel a bit heavier on the right to me
(That might be because the sample was sampled in analog or because your reverbs are panning right)
Also I think you over eq’d your vocal, you took too
Much mid range out I’d say 200-400 cycles is dipped too much.

Edit
Or it needs a lil boost there,
Also you insert your reverbs
Into the vox channel instead
of to a send

[IIAM]

It’s a good track
I feel like I could do without
The hiss throughout the track
it sounds like it’s from the sample(maybe)
Might be tape hiss or the needle
Had a shitload of lint on it.
Or that noise is somewhere in your audio signal.
Also the track feel a bit heavier on the right to me
(That might be because the sample was sampled in analog or because your reverbs are panning right)
Also I think you over eq’d your vocal, you took too
Much mid range out I’d say 200-400 cycles is dipped too much.

Edit
Or it needs a lil boost there,
Also you insert your reverbs
Into the vox channel instead
of to a send