Originally Posted by Edgeworth

Normally I'm pretty level headed and actually quite silent in the forums when it comes to critiquing other people, I ain't got no problems with no one so I don't see the need to shit on people. But...

What the FUCK is going on in this thread? there might be 1 or 2 half decent lines in here. People have no idea what a good line is, Jesus christ. No wonder the site is struggling. Row's opening post had some good lines and the BJ penn is pretty slick. But, Den ima / Denim a? doesn't make any sense at all. Ditto for BERRY YOUR PEOPLE (LOL). Pig/Hog her? Are you fucking kidding me? that wouldn't impress a 4th grader. That "head covered" line is so generic and it could be flipped a buncha different ways (umbrellas, masks, hats, burqas, a face on the front of a magazine, whatever other reachy shit). It's like saying something is red like a fire truck. You could say it's red like any of the other million things that are red, it's not creative whatsoever.

If this is the shit that passes for good bars around here, you're going to scare off all the real talent.

Haha! I love this guy

Originally Posted by Edgeworth

Normally I'm pretty level headed and actually quite silent in the forums when it comes to critiquing other people, I ain't got no problems with no one so I don't see the need to shit on people. But...

What the FUCK is going on in this thread? there might be 1 or 2 half decent lines in here. People have no idea what a good line is, Jesus christ. No wonder the site is struggling. Row's opening post had some good lines and the BJ penn is pretty slick. But, Den ima / Denim a? doesn't make any sense at all. Ditto for BERRY YOUR PEOPLE (LOL). Pig/Hog her? Are you fucking kidding me? that wouldn't impress a 4th grader. That "head covered" line is so generic and it could be flipped a buncha different ways (umbrellas, masks, hats, burqas, a face on the front of a magazine, whatever other reachy shit). It's like saying something is red like a fire truck. You could say it's red like any of the other million things that are red, it's not creative whatsoever.

If this is the shit that passes for good bars around here, you're going to scare off all the real talent.

Haha! I love this guy