Thank you for the feedback, man. Kinda confirmed how I feel about my own bars. I tend to stray away from complexity. It's not the best plan on a rap battle site but I always end up writing simple, blunt bars. It's what I prefer, personally. However, I'm trying to be more competitive so I'll focus on not being so simple and upping the complexity. Most of what I write ends up coming off more like a bad joke than an actual punchline. It's actually why I named myself Brayne Ded. I lack complexity. This was some real insightful feedback, though, so I'll try to use it to help improve. Appreciate the time it took you to do a bar-by-bar breakdown.

Thank you for the feedback, man. Kinda confirmed how I feel about my own bars. I tend to stray away from complexity. It's not the best plan on a rap battle site but I always end up writing simple, blunt bars. It's what I prefer, personally. However, I'm trying to be more competitive so I'll focus on not being so simple and upping the complexity. Most of what I write ends up coming off more like a bad joke than an actual punchline. It's actually why I named myself Brayne Ded. I lack complexity. This was some real insightful feedback, though, so I'll try to use it to help improve. Appreciate the time it took you to do a bar-by-bar breakdown.