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Unread 09-29-2018, 01:56 PM
Erk
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Join Date: Sep 2018
Posts: 310
Mentioned: 69 Post(s)
Tagged: 5 Thread(s)
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69 Won / 34 Lost
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Nine7eight: Wasnt bad.. a nice cohesive verse but I felt like the wording really took away from some points. I liked the verse though, good, solid read.

Seul: This was such a tight verse! I loved the flow and the wording behind it.. solid punches, and pretty creative.. especially for a bunch of gun bars. I actually even read the first line twice just cuz I enjoyed it lol

Shodan: This was a solid verse.. though some of the wording fell flat at points, the punches were still nice. The opener was pretty hard, I enjoyed it.

Vote: Gotta give this to Seul, he wowed me with his creativity and his wording.. it made for a deadly verse lol
Unread 09-29-2018, 01:56 PM   #9
 
Erk
Banned
Estimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 0/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.34/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.34/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.34/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.34/10 stars
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69 Won / 34 Lost
 
Join Date: Sep 2018
Voted: 10 audio / 272 text
Posts: 310
Mentioned: 69 Post(s)
Tagged: 5 Thread(s)


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Nine7eight: Wasnt bad.. a nice cohesive verse but I felt like the wording really took away from some points. I liked the verse though, good, solid read.

Seul: This was such a tight verse! I loved the flow and the wording behind it.. solid punches, and pretty creative.. especially for a bunch of gun bars. I actually even read the first line twice just cuz I enjoyed it lol

Shodan: This was a solid verse.. though some of the wording fell flat at points, the punches were still nice. The opener was pretty hard, I enjoyed it.

Vote: Gotta give this to Seul, he wowed me with his creativity and his wording.. it made for a deadly verse lol
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