This was nice, and it was exactly what I imagined the picture to be about: drug addiction. I liked the metaphors used between drug addiction and being incarcerated as I felt they fit the picture very well. It also it the nail on the head in describing what a lot of drug addicts go through when they're passed through the criminal justice system. The schemes were a bit iffy at times, but not bad overall. Vocab, imagery, and all the other elements were sufficient. Good job fella!
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