I am giving this to Writer 2. Both verses had me engaged, but one brought a surprise ending, that actually surprised me. So the fact that the writer was able to execute exactly what he had in mind, in a creative way, was great. Writer 11 was creative also, and I like the way he displayed his verse, both had good vocabulary, and rhymed well, but I am leaning towards Writer 2 for the more entertaining read. Good-battle guys.
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