A great verse overall. I'd probably give it 8.5/10. It didn't take the route I would have taken myself. I was thinking more in terms of seriously psychotic prisoners who ought to be in mental hospitals, but this isn't too far off from that. It was well-written and well-executed for the most part, despite a few parts that weren't totally fluent, and brought attention to a serious issue without being outright preachy.
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