My first time voting on a topical, so bare with me. I've got to say this was rather split if I'm honest. Both had a different approach. Writer seven had more technical elements and a vibe/flow I was digging more. While writer nine came across rather poetic with their vocabulary and stanza like structure. However I feel like they didn't make as much use of said topic. I've given this to writer seven, purely based on the fact they painted a better picture for me and I felt more emerged in their story than the other. Best of luck to you both!
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