Hm. This is a tough one. First of all, great topic. I wouldn't know where to start writing lol so a nod to both of these participants. Without swaying....I feel like one submission had much better vocabulary, but the other was a more enjoyable read. One submission was more positive and peaceful, and the other was a little more consistent with a troubled/painful mood. If I'm to understand correctly, what should pull a vote is vocabulary + storytelling skills + relevance to the topic. Considering all of these, I'll have to vote accordingly.
My Vote: Writer 9
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