Really great closer for Writer 9 . Felt this was very direct like something you might actually hear from a teacher.
I think writer number 7 had all the makings of a good story. Beginning middle end, humor, love, and triumph. Expressing love, especially young love, is always a good choice when given an opportunity to make music, or write about. It connected to the picture more for me because it was innocent mostly, ( deep in her booty lol). & this writer filled the box up with significantly more storyline. Hope im voting this right.
vote Writer 7
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