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#52 12-17-2017, 05:41 PM

I really, REALLY want to go in on Erupt for this. I mean, even if we disregard that he very clearly just recycled a track he already made....the fact he didn't drop a diss in this, I really do wanna go in.

But the fact that Punk is on the receiving end of this.....too good. @Mani Mula really would get a kick out of this thread haha.

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Listened to the track.

Hate the production. Seems like some of those drum kicks are completely out of rhythm.

The chorus is absolutely abysmal. You can't sign whatsoever. When you you sing "up" it's absolutely brutal.

The rapping was much less annoying than you have been other times, but it's still fairly annoying.

Probably what's most frustrating is that you're basically Iron Man, and don't use your suit. You are a very well trained lyricists, with the ability to rap about anything with solid topics.

But instead of using these assets, you're rapping about money and haters on basic rhyme schemes. It's so annoying. I know, this is probably the way to go if you want to make it, but it's just annoying seeing you give away your only actual talents. It's like watching Jose Aldo refuse to throw a leg kick for like 10 fights in a row. You're a great lyricist and you can write for sure, why are you making popcorn shit for?

Also, your mixtape cover is the worst thing I've ever seen. Seriously, you'd be better not having a cover mate.

12-17-2017, 05:41 PM

I really, REALLY want to go in on Erupt for this. I mean, even if we disregard that he very clearly just recycled a track he already made....the fact he didn't drop a diss in this, I really do wanna go in.

But the fact that Punk is on the receiving end of this.....too good. @Mani Mula really would get a kick out of this thread haha.

---------- Post added at 05:41 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:37 PM ----------

Listened to the track.

Hate the production. Seems like some of those drum kicks are completely out of rhythm.

The chorus is absolutely abysmal. You can't sign whatsoever. When you you sing "up" it's absolutely brutal.

The rapping was much less annoying than you have been other times, but it's still fairly annoying.

Probably what's most frustrating is that you're basically Iron Man, and don't use your suit. You are a very well trained lyricists, with the ability to rap about anything with solid topics.

But instead of using these assets, you're rapping about money and haters on basic rhyme schemes. It's so annoying. I know, this is probably the way to go if you want to make it, but it's just annoying seeing you give away your only actual talents. It's like watching Jose Aldo refuse to throw a leg kick for like 10 fights in a row. You're a great lyricist and you can write for sure, why are you making popcorn shit for?

Also, your mixtape cover is the worst thing I've ever seen. Seriously, you'd be better not having a cover mate.

12-17-2017, 05:41 PM	#52
EtH Guest Voted: 0 audio / 0 text Posts: n/a Mentioned: Post(s) Tagged: Thread(s)	I really, REALLY want to go in on Erupt for this. I mean, even if we disregard that he very clearly just recycled a track he already made....the fact he didn't drop a diss in this, I really do wanna go in. But the fact that Punk is on the receiving end of this.....too good. @Mani Mula really would get a kick out of this thread haha. ---------- Post added at 05:41 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:37 PM ---------- Listened to the track. Hate the production. Seems like some of those drum kicks are completely out of rhythm. The chorus is absolutely abysmal. You can't sign whatsoever. When you you sing "up" it's absolutely brutal. The rapping was much less annoying than you have been other times, but it's still fairly annoying. Probably what's most frustrating is that you're basically Iron Man, and don't use your suit. You are a very well trained lyricists, with the ability to rap about anything with solid topics. But instead of using these assets, you're rapping about money and haters on basic rhyme schemes. It's so annoying. I know, this is probably the way to go if you want to make it, but it's just annoying seeing you give away your only actual talents. It's like watching Jose Aldo refuse to throw a leg kick for like 10 fights in a row. You're a great lyricist and you can write for sure, why are you making popcorn shit for? Also, your mixtape cover is the worst thing I've ever seen. Seriously, you'd be better not having a cover mate.