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Unread 11-13-2017, 08:31 AM
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That's getting off track. ILL wasn't the last name posted. Anyways, I just always felt I read an ILL bar and the wording didn't work, or the wordplay didn't work, or the rhyming didn't work. Like a much more creative version than Obey. A lack of clean delivery.

In b4 "my delivery is unique and has style".
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That's getting off track. ILL wasn't the last name posted. Anyways, I just always felt I read an ILL bar and the wording didn't work, or the wordplay didn't work, or the rhyming didn't work. Like a much more creative version than Obey. A lack of clean delivery.

In b4 "my delivery is unique and has style".
 
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