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**Blue Hulk** · #8 05-24-2015, 12:49 AM

After reading @Lockhart's piece, it gave me the feel of an Assassin's Creed protagonist planning, then, finally, executing the final assassination to conclude the main segment of the game. His drop appealed to me more given that I am an avid gamer and love the Assassin's Creed series, but even if that was not the approach he was intending to make, I think he did a fantastic job as the narrator of the masterpiece in which he did not fail to carry out. I give his piece a Proficient grade; 3/4 - a marvelous score all in all.

Now @Dono was the true Edgar Allan Poe of this match-up. As much of an impact @Lockhart's piece had on me as a reader, @Dono's was rather appeasing and it had me on edge wondering what was going to come next one line after another. @Lockhart's was more predictable as @Dono's was more of a mystery until the near end and any writer should know that that's where the climax is supposed to hit the hardest at. I give his piece a Proficient as well; 3/4. Props.

I believe both succeeded at giving we readers the feel that they wanted to convey to us and they should be grateful that, win or lose, they both dropped amazing pieces, so it's really a win-win regardless of that.

MVGT: NO ONE ... I'm just showing some respect as a participant in this and praise to both, and I'm wishing them the best of luck.

Good stuff y'all. My two thumbs go waaaaaay up to this!!!

**Blue Hulk** · 05-24-2015, 12:49 AM

After reading @Lockhart's piece, it gave me the feel of an Assassin's Creed protagonist planning, then, finally, executing the final assassination to conclude the main segment of the game. His drop appealed to me more given that I am an avid gamer and love the Assassin's Creed series, but even if that was not the approach he was intending to make, I think he did a fantastic job as the narrator of the masterpiece in which he did not fail to carry out. I give his piece a Proficient grade; 3/4 - a marvelous score all in all.

Now @Dono was the true Edgar Allan Poe of this match-up. As much of an impact @Lockhart's piece had on me as a reader, @Dono's was rather appeasing and it had me on edge wondering what was going to come next one line after another. @Lockhart's was more predictable as @Dono's was more of a mystery until the near end and any writer should know that that's where the climax is supposed to hit the hardest at. I give his piece a Proficient as well; 3/4. Props.

I believe both succeeded at giving we readers the feel that they wanted to convey to us and they should be grateful that, win or lose, they both dropped amazing pieces, so it's really a win-win regardless of that.

MVGT: NO ONE ... I'm just showing some respect as a participant in this and praise to both, and I'm wishing them the best of luck.

Good stuff y'all. My two thumbs go waaaaaay up to this!!!

05-24-2015, 12:49 AM	#8
13 Blue Hulk <THE GOAT> Ranked Audio Record 28 Won / 16 Lost 1 1855 Ranked Text Record 558 Won / 215 Lost Exclusive Text Record 3 Won / 0 Lost Join Date: Sep 2009 Voted: 51 audio / 1338 text Posts: 803 Mentioned: 443 Post(s) Tagged: 23 Thread(s)	After reading @Lockhart's piece, it gave me the feel of an Assassin's Creed protagonist planning, then, finally, executing the final assassination to conclude the main segment of the game. His drop appealed to me more given that I am an avid gamer and love the Assassin's Creed series, but even if that was not the approach he was intending to make, I think he did a fantastic job as the narrator of the masterpiece in which he did not fail to carry out. I give his piece a Proficient grade; 3/4 - a marvelous score all in all. Now @Dono was the true Edgar Allan Poe of this match-up. As much of an impact @Lockhart's piece had on me as a reader, @Dono's was rather appeasing and it had me on edge wondering what was going to come next one line after another. @Lockhart's was more predictable as @Dono's was more of a mystery until the near end and any writer should know that that's where the climax is supposed to hit the hardest at. I give his piece a Proficient as well; 3/4. Props. I believe both succeeded at giving we readers the feel that they wanted to convey to us and they should be grateful that, win or lose, they both dropped amazing pieces, so it's really a win-win regardless of that. MVGT: NO ONE ... I'm just showing some respect as a participant in this and praise to both, and I'm wishing them the best of luck. Good stuff y'all. My two thumbs go waaaaaay up to this!!!
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